Meet me in the gloaming
Said Moon to Sun
I think you’re hot!
Why not pick one of us
Asked Stars of Moon
You’re all alike
Too flirtatious
Said Moon
It’s not that I’m ignoring you
Said Moon to Sun
We’re just in different time zones
I asked Rain
Where’s Sun
Washing up
Come back later
Said Rain
Stay away from Comet
Said older star to younger one
He has a reputation
For being fast
Where is Icarus, asked Sun
Melting with love for you
Said Moon
Black holes gape with yearning
Watching Venus
Rise from the sea
I’d like to introduce Diana to Saggitarius
She’s been mooning about and
Needs a different kind of bow…I mean beau.
Sun, said Mother Earth
Medusa is not a nice girl
Just look at her
She’ll turn your heart to stone
Everyone up here has a lover but me
Complained Angel
Try a little makeup
And fold those damn wings
Said Cloud
If you cosmic folk don’t quiet down
I’m gonna blow you away
Said Wind
Who is she?
Asked Moon of Cloud
O, just a poet
Said Cloud
She’s ruining our reputations
Said Moon
Block her!
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Dedicated to CoyoteSings
Amusing read, quite an imagination..well done
Hi, D! Coming from you, I really value those words! Thanks so much for the read and comment!
Oh I love this Jackie! It’s funny and to the point:) x
Yay! I had such fun with this! Thanks much, Steve!
Ha ha! A little bit of twitter spillage in that last line
Title sums it up well … Cosmic FUN!!! Made me chuckle, thanks Jacquie x
Thanks, P. Had a ball writing this…!
Love this. Such a cute poem.
I need to work on more poems like this.
Keep up the good work!
Aw, thanks, Jeff! Fun to write this. Glad you enjoyed!
This is great Jackie
Enjoyable from first word to last.
Diana! Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment! So glad you enjoyed this! I certainly had fun writing it .
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This was great fun to read! Hey diddle diddle.
Hey, Linda! …the cat and the fiddle…and the cow jumped over the moon…yeah! So glad you took the time to read and comment. Happy to have you join the party! Hope all is well! Thanks, Linda!
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cute and amusing read. neat puns
Hello again, Tammy! Thanks for the read and comment on Cosmic Fun. Glad you enjoyed!
Love this poem, Jackie..! You are so much fun!!! I enjoy your poetry very much!
Aw, thanks, Lola! Very kind of you.
Love to have fun and enjoy writing poetry…except when I don’t. LOL! come again!
lol ~ Love it !!! Jackie ~ heehe ‘where’s sun washing up said rain
‘smiling right throughout’
~ Lib ~
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Tee-hee! I had such fun writing this, Lib! Thanks for read and comment!
i am just glad you left Uranus out of this…smiles….this was a rip jackie…a treat to read and if you could only see the smile on my face…i never want the nickname comet….just saying…
Brian! hahahahahahahaha! Uranus! Let’s see.. maybe something like “don’t pee on my leg and tell me it’s raining outside” hahahahahaha! Ok, Comet…thanks much for the read and comment. Glad you enjoyed!
I love how creative this is, great!
I had such fun writing this…thanks much for the read and comment!
oh jackie – such fun writing…loved it…wouldn’t it be funny to overhear their conversations…but seems you did…and they didn’t block you..smiles
Those suckers betta not block me…they owe me! I write about ‘em alot! LOL! Thanks, Claudia, for your read and comment!
lol….a fun read, Jackie. Made me chuckle. Enjoyed very much! Thanks and a Happy Thanksgiving to you!
Fun writing this piece! Glad you enjoyed, Louise. And thanks for the Thanksgiving wishes! Cheers!
This was clever and fun Jackie. I enjoyed your personifications. They had a bit of a “senryu” feel. Even though they weren’t in a form, they were spare, energetic and inventive. Hope you have a really happy Thanksgiving. Thanks for coming by my place. Much appreciated.
Gay! Thanks so much for the read and comment! I had fun writing this. So glad you enjoyed it. And a very Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours!